A brief sun shower
dampened
our clothes
you said the salt air
tickled
your nose
as we awkwardly
kissed
under a seagull serenade.
Author notes
8 to 10 lines
Picture prompt
Image credit:
Mark Griffin
A contest entry
- Morning Picture Prompt by Cerulean Sunrise.
475 points, ended October 13, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Sometimes the awkward, un-choreographed moments make for the most special memories and lend themselves to the best poetry.
Congratulations on a very well deserved Silver dear
Love Margaret
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Awww.. how you managed to get something so precious from that pic I will never know.. your talent shines my friend. Congrats on that sexy silver.. well deserved!
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Just lovely and appropriate for the prompt. Thank you for sharing!
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A shiny bauble fits a seagull serenade so well. Congratulations! ~Pamela
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Beautiful imagery.
Awkward moments are often memorable. -
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Thanks Mark, glad you enjoyed it.
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This is lovely, Michael. Seagulls in poetry is always a winner - beautiful and great play on the senses here too!
~ Nicolette
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Thanks Nicky.
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Oh I do like this. GREAT take on that image. I enjoyed this very much. I liked the part about the salt air tickling the nose. Quite vivid in imagery. ~Pamela
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Oh, thank you Pam!
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