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Seasonal Changes




leaves tumble to earth
as coolness brushes my cheek
reminded of change




Words: K.Botka
10/13/08

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Time flies as the leaves fall!

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  • azure85 gold member
    October 26, 2008

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    leaves tumble to earth
    as coolness brushes my cheek
    reminded of change

    Very beautiful haiku, with a great reflection that flows from L2 to L3. It is a period of change, and one which is very beautiful. Thank you so much.


  • ronnica
    October 17, 2008
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    This is so nice a Haiku
    real good visual and I can almost hear a crispness
    underfoot.


  • Candy6
    October 13, 2008
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    Nice one