Don't you know she died with you on that terrible day,
Don't you know I miss her as much as I miss you this way.
Days of Happiness and innocents blew away in the wind,
And lost memories blow through me burning holes in my skin.
She was my better half and she died with you,
Four years tore me up and left me without you.
Without her whats left of me is someone else,
Without you it's just memories and I doubt if it's real what I felt.
I want her back and I want her with you,
I wanna go back when I was her and you to let her love you.
The days go by now, all in a haze,
And life with me and you probably won't faze.
Because you died with her heart and half of me,
And what you took I can't take back until the next time we meet.
Because there were two parts of me, and one died with you,
On that terrible day... don't you know she died with you ?
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Mylee
to youssef May God let your soul rest in peace.. i'll always love you
A contest entry
- I'm alone......are you? by movedon.
700 points, ended November 25, 2008, 103 entries
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Hi - thanks for entering my contest - I enjoyed this. Best of luck!
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this is so emotional and reallly , okay this is SO the wrong word to describe it but shocking springs to mind.
i really enjoyed the last bit;
Because you died with her heart and half of me,
And what you took I can't take back until the next time we meet.
Because there were two parts of me, and one died with you,
On that terrible day... don't you know she died with you ?
it's quite direact an di love that about poems (:
Ingriid
x.
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this is so sad you seem so lost and lonely living and dieing at the same time trying and lieing at the same time so full of emotion this is its very raw i feltiwas on the jouney with you silently by yourside waiting to catch you when you fall your words a
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thank you..i dont know why i get so emotional when im talking to u and reading your comments..i guess its because you understand the pain...this is a very special poem it means alot to me that u loved it..
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