Morning awakens warm, pristine.
overwhelmed with vista seen.
Blue lagoon rushes in on tide,
new lovers kiss, lay side by side.
Island breeze touch skin bare,
virgin moment beneath sky fair.
Love's reflection in eyes aglow.
on passion paradise portico.
A contest entry
- Morning Picture Prompt by markgrif.
475 points, ended October 13, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Excellent
A very fine write. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done. -
Wow
This should be another contest winner, I really enjoyed this also, you weave magic with your words, I could beel the emotion, blessings with love John
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Wonderful Comment
Hello John,
It always brings a smile when you stop by. Thank you for reading my poem. Hope all is well. Hugs and Smiles.
Blessings,
Love Sandy
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Very nice...sounds like a place I'd like to be!!!
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Always a pleasure when you stop by. Hugs and Smiles. Take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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I am smiling with Pamela.
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Thank you for the nice comment. Take care.
Sandy
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Now this just made me smile. Nice work.
~Pamela
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Good Morning Pamela
So glad you enjoyed. Thank you for stopping by and reading. Take care, Sandy
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Now that is so verrrrrrrry
sweeeeeeeeeeet; my friend.
thank you for the read this morning!!!
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Thank You Sandra.
I appreciate you stoppinf by and reading. Great comment!!!!! Take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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