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Beauty's Cause

Oh, with these mere delights of beauty's cause
Which by your weary heart are seldom seen
I'll veil the moon, the sun and nature's laws
To have you to myself my lovely queen

So nothing but the stars and space and time
Will then enchant your soul to bring anew
The music of our fate: sweet heaven's chime
and grant the darkness in your mind adieu

But such things I cannot do on my own
I'll need your breath and spirit to create
That perfect place: a place where kisses blown
Can break through all the chaos; I'll await

Until we meet within our dreams again
Please keep these thoughts to ease your deepest pain

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  • wonderfully written with the rhyming helping it flow and roll from my tongue.


  • cre8tiv-writer
    October 14, 2008
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    Incredibly sensational!!!


  • luna-midnight gold member
    October 13, 2008

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    awww this is just so lovely
    beautiful poem, and keep writting. take care
    Stephanie ♥

  • Erigeneia
    October 13, 2008

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    Breathtaking...

    The music of our fate: sweet heaven's chime
    and grant the darkness in your mind adieu

    Beautiful writing, I am left with such a lovely image in my mind...

    ~E.