red orange yellow
basking in soft daylight's glow
casting long shadows
Author notes
Awesome picture you have got there!
A contest entry
- Fall into Haiku by azure85.
600 points, ended October 29, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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red orange yellow
basking in soft daylight's glow
casting long shadows
This is very pretty, all the colors and the stillness of the scene. A very good haiku about autumn, thank you so much!
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Hi azure85
Thank you.
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Excellent
Well well well what can I say other than EXCELLENT!!!!! I love this write so much I mena the off set beauty through out this write and I just really like it alot. its truly an amazing Haiku you have penned here and I love it. keep up the excellent work you get 3 clappys from me as well * very best of luck in the contest as well
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Hi SmokinHotWhiteTiger
Thank you for the clappys.
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wow...amazing
I hope you win this
I just bow
by your amazing talent
in writing haiku
you had me with the red orange yellow
Anna Lee
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Hi Anna Lee
Thank you. I hope to win something too but I have just started writing haiku so I am happy when people likes them.
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This is a good Haiku and it rhymed, too.
Hope you win, pengyou Lee.
Good luck in the contest.
Sorry for missing some of your poems, friend.
summer51
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Hi summer
Thank you. Why are you not taking part? Maybe later huh? You have been missing for awhile, that's why.. I too hope to win something but actually, I still am trying to learn more.
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Ayyy...I've been "experimenting some forms of poetry, pengyou Lee. Haiku for me is too hard eh...
I like PANTUN and limericks.... much easier...
Just teasing you. Actually, busy-busy at work.
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Hi summer
That's what I mean. I am still trying to "see" the images of some of the haikus that I have read.
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