Image Credit: Mark Griffin
If I stood on the tallest railing
pretending to dance,
preparing to fly,
fingers grasping the wind -
I could soar!
Horizon beckons beyond boundaries
past barricades and bridges
fresh with the idea of joy,
and oh to expound these thoughts
with winded wisp upon a loving heart!
A contest entry
- Morning Picture Prompt by Cerulean Sunrise.
475 points, ended October 13, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congratulations
on the trophy Pam!
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Jim
Thank you. This was fun to write.
~Pamela 
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Lovely Poem!
Congratulations on winning the Bronze. Lovely imagery. A pleasure to read.
Take care,
Sandy
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Thank you Sandy. I am so pleased you enjoyed this. ~Pamela
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Loved the diction and assonance in this piece as well as vivid imagery, well done Pam, and congrats!
Love,
Mj.
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Thank you so much. ~Pamela
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"...a loving heart"
Makes me feel like soaring. -
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Thank you Mark for the wonderful comment, superb image prompt, great contest and the honor of bronze. Good stuff here. ~Pamela
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