brilliant blaze of red
winds of change whisper winter
autumnal display
Author notes
prompt:
write a haiku about autumn
traditional
A contest entry
- Fall into Haiku by azure85.
600 points, ended October 29, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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brilliant blaze of red
winds of change whisper winter
autumnal display
All the colors of the season, with the cold wind blowing in winter. A good haiku about autumn, thank you so much.
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Very Nice
another very berry nice write here. I do like the over all integrity to this poem and where you are headed with this poem as well. any ways just a brilliant down to Earth write and its so refreshing to read. any ways nice work and keep it up and good luck in the contest =)
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A blaze to warm us on a cool afternoon!
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beautiful use of language. brilliant imagery!
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Beautiful Haiku. Garnet leaves, I love this gem used to describe fall.
~Pamela 
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