I'm feeling good, my heart is high
through pen to the paper admire,
"freedom is just another word
for nothing to loose",
I could get behind the dude I like what
he says.
I'm going to get with the wind
and induce this peace a chance.
Author notes
Prompt:Hippie
30-40 words
Janis Joplin quote:"freedomis just another word for nothing to
loose"
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of brilliance #6 by AutumnGypsy.
450 points, ended October 14, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a cute piece, I love the incorportation of Janis's line. Best to you in the contest
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Thank you
Thank you for the wonderful comment given. Haley27
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this is lovely
short and sweet
love always
Erica Carnea
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Thank you
Thank you for the wonderful comment given. Haley27
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