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You Lesson My Burdens [small prayer]


lord—
thank you for sitting
on my right shoulder today
I was leaning to the left,
from life’s burdens
and heavy heart
I really didn’t mind
i carried the
the extra weight
because you know in your heart
I would do it for you,
If you walked in my shoes



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  • Mickie27
    October 23, 2008

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    I like the way this is short, but to the point. Sometimes these type of poems are the best. This was very powerful. Well done.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    October 13, 2008

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    wow! what a beautiful prayer, and a very specific tone in the post, good luck in this contest,it looks worthy of a win
    Linda


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 13, 2008

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    WELL YOU KNOW I LOVE THIS!
    I WAS LEANING TO THE LEFT,
    FROM LIFE'S BURDENS
    AND HEAVY HEART
    I LOVE LOVE THE ENDING
    VERY PRECIOUS SOULFUL PRAYER POEM MY FRIEND
    GOD BLESS YOU...


  • Samplette gold member
    October 13, 2008

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    So simple, yet it is volumnizing in beauty. A wonderful prayer to the Lord. I really enjoyed the read. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam