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Twilight

The sky mourns the day like many ink black rivers, while our whispers walk in shivers.

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A long one liner but nonetheless still one line

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 25, 2008

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    I like it, love whispers walking. Great line, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.

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    whisper

  • Stoneface Gremlin
    October 22, 2008

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    Very deep

    For one line, I think the thought it provokes is very deep. It has striking imagery. It conjures an image of cold and secrecy of the night.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    I do like this very much it does have great thought in it very interesting line good luck in the contest be well

  • The Rivaling Mimic
    October 13, 2008
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    Definitly Not An Easy Task

    I loved it for the fact that it provided imagery. I've written one one line poem and I think they're rather difficult to compose. Excellent!