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steller

life
taking its toll upon a soul
less of an abrasive on the outside

created little skimmers on a pool
an aura that still shines through the battery

previous excursions unsuccessful
things looking brighter

outer spheres looking a light
politics for loonies and goonies

its steller
single
no strings attached

can you pick it apart?

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  • Eusebius
    January 15

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    A most thoughful and meditative piece of poetry here, really neat and nifty stuff throughout! bravo!


  • bloodletting
    November 1, 2008

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    soaked in hope, this is one of the most encouraging and brightened writes i have read of you. it shines...

    phil