Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Savor

Hope:

God's
table salt



Author notes

Prompt: Submit a poem consisting of four words only

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 10 of 10

  • penman gold member
    November 25, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    Excellent

    Fantastic choice of four works. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Shakes-spear
    October 25, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    sprinkle with care

    hope can make one go crazy at times. Expecally if it is in the wrong things. Good luck in the contest and in life itself,The Shaker


  • Swan song gold member
    October 23, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Now this is a poem that will stick to your thoughts all the day and night long! You are stunning!!!!!


  • Blue Rew silver member
    October 22, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Excellent! What a mind you possess that can so easily link such deeper meaning to everyday circumstance. Blue


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    October 19, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Brilliant. He sprinkles liberally.


  • Nights Aikata
    October 13, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    You're amazing. You see everything in such wonderful, beautiful ways. That's all I've got to say.

  • Mairi bheag gold member
    October 13, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Savor:

    Damn
    fine poem





  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 13, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Oh, I love this! God sprinkles hope on everything we take in! A wonderful use of 4 words. Great creativity. Good luck in the contest!

  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    October 13, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This one runs deeper than many poems I've read consisting of a 100words! All the best in the contest!

    Becks

1 - 10 of 10