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Pangs

Logistic's of the lady
time frames wrong
for...
    yeah a lesson learned

Can't help
even with busy
numbered days
can't help
but...

        Feel the pangs.

Writing the outside
world away
pieces still tear
with an inner bleed.

Logistic's of the lady
knowing way deep
I'm not the one for her
to keep.

Can't help
even knowing
she was right
as I listen
heartbeats
mine
bleed.

Jasmine in the air
apples fall
memories made
inside lost love n'
envelopes remain empty.

Don't have the heart anymore.


Can't help
but to listen at times
as bleeding inner pieces
tear...


Author notes

Had to write a sad dream I had last night.
Yep even though I had a good weekend.

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  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    wow

    my friend this is very sad, but written extremely well, wish the best for ya big guy hope things look up very soon!