Songs of peace
fell like autumn leaves
upon a world
on the brink.
Children were born
with future's flowers
in their hair,
dancing on zephyr's
freedom.
There was
and still is,
hope,
but the battle
continues.
Author notes
Prompt: Hippie
30-40 words
In a list
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of brilliance #6 by AutumnGypsy.
450 points, ended October 14, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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well done . . liked "Songs of peace fell like autumn leaves" and "dancing on zephyr's freedom" . . congrats on the silver !!
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Wonderful
What a terrific write. So very well done. Congratulations on the silver. It was well deserved.
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WOW, my friend...this is beautiful and so soft and peaceful...you did this one perfect...I love the closing for it makes you feel hope...excellent take on the prompt...
Love,
mystic
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Fantastic, you did this beautiful prompt justice. I love the beauty you captured and turned into a masterpiece. Best to you in the contest
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A great write on the given prompt. I enjoyed this one very much
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This is well written for the prompt. Loved the use of children and flowers for the future. You used the imagery very well. And I really did like this poem. Good job
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