hear me cry
i am ugly and i want to die
hear me whine
'til i drive your mind across the line
hear me bitch
cuz nothings ever gonna switch
hear me moan
i cant do anything on my own
hear me rant
about all the things i think i cant
hear me rave
cuz i resent all those who are truly brave
hear me chirp
in my heart, i'm just a twerp
hear me pout
i cant figure anything out
hear me sigh
cuz i'm ugly and i want to die
Author notes
this is for all you whiny motherfuckers who write nothing but angst
Written January 26th, 2004
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this is the koolest ever! lol all though all i write is dark and sapy love poems...lol...but still i like it....and the comment...FUNNY!
later,
Kris -
hear me sigh
cuz i'm ugly and i want to die
this remindes me of a poem of mine about being ugly this was so full of pain and anger i loved it keep it up! -
Truth lies in Honesty
hahahaa, yeah, I feel the same way about those people who just can't seem to get out of depression mode and write about something slightly happier than the stuff they do.. Great putting it to words, I likey! -
lol good point made here kinda funny too
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yeah sock it to them ...this is terribly good and goodly terrible and very well no put.very goodnbad and badgood i lovedhatedit.
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WOW!! HAHAHAHA i loooooove this. tis so funny and it drives me insane just reading it cuz i've got like 2million friends and alll they do is bitch and moan and whine and they never get off there fat butts and do any freakin thing about it! pessimists are insane i tell you! AHHHH!!!!!!!! heheheh well ur poem deffinately got the point across. man. dang. good job!
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