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Unconventional




A rope gone through by languorous tremble,
an intangible agreement to nuances of fire,
infinite sensuousness of a mystical organ,
voices exiting heat melodic to smell lyrics

Long curly hairs to stir illogical
trance dance of delirious frenzy.



















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Prompt: Hippie
38 words

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    October 14, 2008

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    This is an interesting take on the prompt, you got me thinking that is for sure. Best to you in the contest