What reality discloses
What truths reveal
What secrets shout
And headlines seal
What thoughts amuse
What hearts display
What minds dislodge
And souls portray
What dusk believes
What sunrise dreams
What daylight opens
And what night screams
What voices deny
What writing preserves
What movement suggests
And everything deserves
What poverty delivers
What money rejects
What loneliness surrenders
And popularity accepts
It’s what trust protects
What acceptance demands
It’s what passion drives
And hate remands
It’s what affection ponders
And what dreams speak
It is unconditional love
And its what hearts seek
It’s what religion attempts
And what god proves
It’s what politicians dismiss
And what humanity moves
A contest entry
- haven't been here for 3 months but I have 4,000+ points by Nam.
4075 points, ended October 15, 2008, 36 entries
Honorable mention
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700 points, ended December 6, 2008, 45 entries
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What did you think
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'What dusk believes
What sunrise dreams
What daylight opens
And what night screams'
i love that stanza, i love the rhyme and how well it flows and the images it creates in my mind.
thanks for entering
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What dusk believes
What sunrise dreams
What daylight opens
And what night screams - those lines were utter brilliant, such a contrast of words and times in the day ! youd get all my applause if i had any left :s -
This is another brilliant poem, simplistic rhyme jus makesit more powerful, i look forward to readin more poems from you
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I didn't like the simplistic and rythmic "It's what..." and "It is..." march. The content of your poem has enought thought and image to show you are smart enough to write a poem much more complex; subtle; varied; lyric; etc. But that is just one person's opinion. Don't stop writing. I want to read more of your work. Let your dreams speak.
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Very Impressionable.
I liked the movement of this poem. You did a great job in catching my interest and keeping it. -
LOVE it!!!
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WOW
WOW. Really wow.
WELCOME to AP
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