Bare feet danced
in the rain,
honored all things
living, no acid needed
for her world was bold.
Some called her
"flower child",
others shock their heads,
but her mother knew
she was a free spirit
misunderstood.
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of brilliance #6 by Aussie Gypsy.
450 points, ended October 14, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Ahh I love this, it captures something flower powery about it, amazing. best to you in the contest
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Just wonderful! You have certainly captured the 'spirit' of the prompt wonderfully
All the best to you
Gaylene
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