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across a sea so close

i see a window
hiding a light
across a sea so close
staying up all night.

whose light is this?
crawling over water
crawling under clouds
is it my daughter?

i see a train hold fast
blowin' clouds around
across a land so vast
bending green to brown

whose cloud is this?
racing under the sun
racing above the water
is it gonna be my son?

i see a vivid dream
falling up into the sky
across a sleep so steep
i never want to say good bye

whose sky is this?
floating over fire
floating under stars
is it gonna be my child?

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