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cry on me

Steady stream of water
  washes over us
purifying us of the sin
we will commit


  when the car door slams
and the brake lights flash
and the tires weep

  seconds after we whisper words of love
and eternity



in the trap of time
  I take to cherish and hold
  every teardrop

and in my empty apartment
or your busy weekend home
we will squint at the same celestial objects
at slightly different angles


with the seconds running out
  in this joke of a photo finish
we cling to each other's skin

melting under the warmth
  of the last shower


don't mind my dramatic displays
  of undying
misplaced affection

cry on me

Author notes

Option C - Love

A critical view of love in the transition from existing to dissipating.

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