Ice-flowers, crystal caves and darkened skies, she succumbs to her Winter Dream.
In a list
A contest entry
- One line by whispernthedark.
700 points, ended October 25, 2008, 43 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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a brilliant write and i think its a testament to your talent writing such an effective poem in so little lines
beautiful imagery
your poetry does pick me up sometimes
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neato! i love it.good job.
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I love the visual of this, and then what's to happen once she's succumbed? That's another poem. Wonderful line, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.
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whisper
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Ahhh..ofcourse. What a pretty dream. I feel cold already.
This is great Ylova, I've only been away 2 weeks
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And it seems right around the corner. I always thought of snowflakes a little dancers but now that you mention it they do seem like little flowers and a drirt could be a bouquet, Quite a wonderful poet you are. Best of luck, Boog
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Ooh very nice,
short and sweet
Well done
and thanks for dropping by and leaving a comment
Good luck in the comp
Ken
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Is winter so cool in your place dear child
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Absolutely beautiful!!!!
Well done.
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Oh ice-flowers sounds very prettiful, crystral caves sounds divine and the darkened skies just peak my interest
Great!
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Stay safe
~Manda
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This is a strong poem. Very vivid imagery, and in some ways, serene in it's own dark way. This is beyond beautiful. Keep it up! And good luck to you in the contest!
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oohhh, pretty i want a snowflake hehehe
beautiful
good luck -
This is wonderful, so much imaginary and sadness for just one line. Best of luck in this contest!
~Noor
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your winter dream sounds like.... I dont know, like a pain pill for the soul
Good luck for the contest. Nice background
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I think I am in this contest as well. I do so enjoy this line of yours.
So ethereal and still concrete. A wonderful blend!
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