The dark surrounds,
Torturing, tight;
But in your eyes,
I see only light.
A contest entry
- Dark - 13 words by Lady Michaella.
325 points, ended October 19, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thanks Autumn
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Wow, so short... But in these words you expressed so much, lovely flow... love it... Keep writing sis!
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Thanks lemon
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That's really lovely: so simple.
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Thanks KyleBerg, I'm glad you like it
Chin up,
Summer Moon xx -
Pure simple beauty.
Well done -- the honourable mention is very much deserved.
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Thankyou for your kind words Mike
Summer Moon xx -
Wow. Very well done for so few words. Congratulations on the HM. It was well deserved.
Mike -
Seriously, I've read yours, and let me tell you, it's excellent, really beautiful. It doesn't rip mine at all, they are two different poems and therefore can't really be compared. Anyway, I'm sure you will do very well in the contest, as I said, your poem is utterly exquisite, and it is sure to recieve an excellent result. In fact, all your work is briliant so you have absolutely nothing to worry about!
thankyou for the comment
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Amazing
I'm in this contest too, and I can safely say yours rips mine. -
The lucky 13!!! marvellous thoughts!!! I see how when we are in love we see no darkness and all around us seems so beautiful!
Good job!
Love and light,
Lencio
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Thanks Miki!
It was an absolute pleasure to enter
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OMFG. Wat the hell, that is so dam amazing. It is so simple but the ideas and feelings it creates is just priceless. I absolutely love this, thank you so much for entering. This entry is greatly appreciated.
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