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Alone in Absence

Away from the sounds of love,
Breath long and labored.
Back to my lonely space
Destiny again denies me.
Forever alone, forever in a void
Flower buried deep within my heart
Hold onto it, don’t let it go
Live oh flower sweet, for my love does not.
Mark time, for time is slow
Message me not, I will not answer
Never again will I hold you.
New love you have, I am alone no solace.
Question, Madame Fate, what I have done?
Same answer, silence, so damn loud.
Scar upon my heart, opens yet again
Smile you may, in a picture on the wall
Twilight holds no peace
Waiting in the darkness is death
Window to heart, see it bleed.
Wrong love, right time.

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  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    October 27, 2008

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    "Twilight holds no peace
    Waiting in the darkness is death
    Window to heart, see it bleed.
    Wrong love, right time."

    Very interesting take with the word prompts and very unique entry.

    Thank you very much for entering ^^
    Claire x