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When the heart is heavy with worry and insecurity

Something says stop, go away.
Leave me alone, the song plays.
How to let it all out. Screaming
explicatives while you sleep.

Feigned inspiration. Words,
incessant beams of useless
information straight to the mind.
Words will tear you apart.

Stolen passages from the liner
notes. So much to live for, not
enough time. Will you take me
when the nightmare ends?

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