My life could be simple,
but it's something every day.
Because Me, Myself, or I
is always getting in the way.
"I", performs with confidence,
if environmently stressed.
But if the urgency's resolved.
my spirit gets depressed.
Now, if speaking for "Myself",
control's the ingredient.
The show is must be cancelled,
if the cast is not obedient.
And finally there is just "Me",
pleasing people is my goal.
Thoughts of any confrontation,
rip at the fabric of my soul.
So now you see the dilemma,
situations I can't face.
This cocky, controlling wimp
should be put in his place!
HELP!!!!
A contest entry
- Quote Contest! by vampedvixen.
1200 points, ended December 8, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Superb Plus +
I absolutely love both the illustration, and your poem. It is really great, you have said what I implied, and have said it very well indeed. -
Thank you for entering my contest! I thought all the entries were so well written and this one is no exception. I love the interplay between the three sides of yourself, it's something I've felt in my own life and I can really relate to it. You've done a really great job here and you should feel proud!
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Superb plus
'tis a fine write, indeed. What cohesive thought your poem has for being written by 3 different individuals (lol). Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Again, well done.
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