Here I am waiting.
Day after day but no word from you.
I'm waiting by the window,
staring into nothing but blue.
I hold onto our memory,
of a girl and boy,
pathetically in love,
with nothing but joy.
I want you back,
but I must wait.
You'll come back,
its our fate.
So here I sit,
waiting for you,
by a window,
with nothing but blue.
A contest entry
- -- Word Bank -- by Noir mariposa...x.
550 points, ended November 1, 2008, 17 entries
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What a sad poem
I loved the stanza of:
"So here I sit,
waiting for you,
by a window,
with nothing but blue"
Sweet but sad ^^
Good luck with your entry
Claire x
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thanx
THANK YOU!!!!I had a really hard time writing that,it isn't much but I had to think lots cause I suck at ryming but it seemed to match the feeling of the poem. -
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Well it's good ^^
I always found rhyming quite easy actually
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