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Fall Scene (Hay(na)ku)

Leaves
Leaving trees
Dance in breeze

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  • Frogzter gold member
    October 12
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    Interesting form and great take on the prompt. SO much said in such few words. Thanks for entering and best wishes,

    Frogz~


  • The Fun House silver member
    November 2, 2008

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    Now this is an interesting form. Few words, but easily lets the mind flow to the image. I do like this alot.


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    October 20, 2008

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    Great!

    I like this a lot. Is this an original form? Never heard of this one. It's very clever. I do believe you should patent this. It's like a Haiku Rictameter!

    • Billbard silver member
      October 20, 2008
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      Hay(na)ku created bu Eileen Tabios is a three line, six word poem, with no syllable or rhyme restrictions or requirements.Line one, 1 word, line two, 2 words, line three, 3 words.Gooogle has a more detailed explanation.Thanks for your nice comment.


  • suseann
    October 14, 2008

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    I'm so.......well acquainted with this waltz of color to the point of it being a losing battle.Moving seasonal verse.

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