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Novelty

Living
In
A
Fabrication
Seeing
Reality...

A contest entry

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    October 20, 2008

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    Intense!

    Clever write young one. Juxtaposition works well. Think about Haiku. I think you'd make a good Haijin.
    . 6 words with power.

  • x26ss
    October 13, 2008
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    hmm, is that it?