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But

But I don't want to hurt you!

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    October 20, 2008

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    Good!

    You didn't! I can hear someone saying this...perhaps it was you? Perhaps someone said it to you?

    • Writing0Freedom
      October 20, 2008
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      Its whats keeping me from breaking my friends illusion about another friend.