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The parcel

Missing from the
Pick-up line,
Damaged
In-transit,

A late delivery
On the shelf
Past the sell-by date.

Fate has driven
The girl through
Frustration,
Desolation,
Destruction,

Isolation,
To teach her
Who she really was.

Author notes

PROMPT - Quote:
"he was the only kid I knew that could stay out all night and not be missed..."
~by Claude Brown from the Novel, "Manchild in the Promiseland"~

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    Ah...sigh..what a touching description you did here revealing the truth of your ownself..such a depth in words is a real agony of the life..you are very brave poet indeed..well done..and thanks for sharing...


  • poetryality silver member
    October 13, 2008

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    Loved that first stanza! What images that relays! I feel this lost child in my heart, and feel deeply her sorrow. There is intensity in this poem poet. Thank you for this entry, and I wish you well in the challenge.


    Much Love & REspect ♥

    Renee