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The Last Days of the Madmen

c
These are the last days of the madmen
The ones who went insane to save the world
Doing all they could
To rescue the ones they knew they should
(repeat)

v1
This world is falling apart
It's always been crumbling
The people never know what's up,
Or down, left, right, or inside out
Born to die, born to serve
Serving until death comes for a final call

c
These are the last days of the madmen
The ones who went insane to save the world
Doing all they could
To rescue the ones they knew they should
(repeat)

v2
This world will never save you
It ain't the path to Heaven
The people will lead you astray
Your greed, hate, lust shall feed all doubt
Create love, spread it 'round
'Round and 'round share love just like the Servant Paul

c
These are the last days of the madmen
The ones who went insane to save the world
Doing all they could
To rescue the ones they knew they should
(repeat)

B
These are the last days of the True Hearts
The ones who sacrifice to save the world
Doing all they can
To help the soul of the lost man
(repeat)

These are the last days of the madmen
The ones who went insane to save the world
Doing all they could
To rescue the ones they knew they should

They went crazy for The Christ
To resist Lucifer's vice

Author notes

A song with a great spiritual insight and very deep meaning sent to me from God.
Comments and critique welcomed!
Hope you enjoy and God bless!

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  • princess hope
    October 25, 2008

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    I like the fact that you went for a song, but it did not feel like you mastered it the way you would master a poem, still Very deep indeed.

    Best of luck