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My Day

  Cloudy

      blue skys
     
keep falling

     
                down

Author notes

My day consists of the world falling down around me, and it never stops.

A contest entry

What do you think? How can I improve? What was your least favorite part? Your favorite?

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    October 20, 2008

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    Nice!

    Seems I'm doing something the host & other contestants should've done! I sure hope things start looking up for you!