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The Great Attempt

Missed the boat.

Swam.

A contest entry

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  • Shakes-spear
    October 25, 2008

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    been there

    did that got the wet suit to prove it....many of them! Good luck in the contest and in life itself,The Shaker

  • Trew
    October 15, 2008
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    lol=