moan like the upright
double bass, sing and chop like
the small mandolin,
who has to compete with your
tiny, crying, violins
Author notes
I'm a sucker for good folk music... 
A contest entry
- Fresh As A Flower (No Prewrites) by HereComesTheSun.
450 points, ended October 26, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Picture Quickie by piccola.
400 points, ended November 11, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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haha i love this piece it has a a smile and a vibrant happiness to it great work
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Thanks!
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