Your pain is in her eyes
A contest entry
- Six Words by still.she.waits.
300 points, ended October 20, 2008, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
so, what did ya think?? o.o
Comments
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Good Job!
Conveys a lot in 6 words! You might want to try Haiku. I think you'd be good at it.


