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this stormy sky

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This Stormy Sky always rains Sunshine.





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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    October 20, 2008

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    Clever!

    Contrast and opposition can have a powerful impact! I have a feeling you'd be really good at Haiku.


  • Flight of Dragons
    October 13, 2008

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    Love IT

    A nice emphizize on your words from an earlier poem I read. A favorite quote of mine I posted it on my homepage along with your link. I even like the little *~*~*~* thingys. Cool!