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The Meaning of Life

Eat this.

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Why me?

A contest entry

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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    October 26, 2008
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    interesting
    this could be interpreted many ways
    congrats on the gold


  • sheltered
    October 26, 2008
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    indeed this makes your mind go in a lot of
    different directions
    congrats


    • DolceVito gold member
      October 26, 2008
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      Thank you...

      ...directions? Mouth to midsection, mouth to butthole, etc.


  • Shakes-spear
    October 25, 2008
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    well

    I'm on a diet! LOL

    Good luck in the contest and in life, The Shaker


    • DolceVito gold member
      October 26, 2008
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      Thank you...

      You have to eat to live...Remember what He said at the last supper?

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