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Death Upon a moonless night.

Should I die before the clouded night.
I think I'll be the one to finaly stop the fight.
Lost and found, buy those held deep.
falling apart and loosing sleep.
head pounding heart aching,
Never able to stop the constant shaking.
coughing so strong it could knock me out.
feeling the pressure that time may run out.
known soon it maybe my time.
I may only be 22 but its longer than i thought i'd live.
death upon a moon less night,
wasn't quited what i wanted,
but should I die this night just kno.
I'll never leave your side,
I'll be the strong one for you after its done.
I'm sorry I couldn't stay strong
and survive just one more night, should i die tonight.

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  • Little Blue Bird
    October 13, 2008

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    :(

    Blitz, Why you wanna make me cry?
    Depressing poem, love. Its good but sad.

    "If you die before you wake I pray the Lord your soul to take." That is my prayer for you. I don't want you to go... well you know how I feel and what I believe. Just remember, God loves you very much, no matter what you've done.