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As Love Returns.



As I stumble on, those dreams I once thought gone, I'll share each precious one with you.

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 25, 2008

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    What a sweet line, made me smile and lean in to hear. Great write, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.

    ♥
    whisper

  • Topnotchsy
    October 16, 2008

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    Nice write with this. Love how you managed to throw a touch of rhyming in this single line piece. Best of luck in the contest with this piece.


  • albymyheart gold member
    October 12, 2008

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    Touching!

    Lovely sentiment, marries well with the pic. Speaking of a beautiful new love where all those forgotten dreams can now come true. Very nice and intimate...alby