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Addiction

Invisible friction

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  • DolceVito gold member
    October 26, 2008
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    Interesting

    Good choice of words


  • Shakes-spear
    October 25, 2008

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    Ok

    i can see how this could be true, but still its something we cannot control after a while, not an action we are in control of!. Good luck in the contest and in life, The Shaker


    • Cosmic Musketeer
      October 25, 2008
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      I'm not sure what you mean. What I'm saying with these two words is that an addiction is an INVISIBLE FRICTION between ones self and others, a constant part of ones mind that does not need to be there, and in essence influences every bit of the persons being.


  • arezes mom
    October 25, 2008
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    well said. thats it.