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Eternal Flame

This burning inside my heart,
an eternal flame of desire.
Just the touch of your hand,
ignites passion's fire.

Hormones rage out of control,
inhibitions are cast aside.
I am the moth, you the flame,
my longing, I no longer hide.

Your sensual love is the fuel,
as embers you gently stoke.
Temperatures rise, gets hotter,
with each soft caress and stroke.

Burning love is too hot to handle,
succumb to your many charms.
You light a raging fire within me,
losing all resistance in your arms.


Author notes

Contest Prompt...
'But how can I stop a pyro from lighting a flame inside my heart?'

Burn Baby

Background by friend and poet Errant Panther. Thank You.

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  • carole21
    October 15, 2008

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    nicely done . . liked "an eternal flame of desire" and "Your sensual love is the fuel" . . good luck in the contest

  • chiefmac
    October 13, 2008

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    Hot and sensual... Lovely write for the prompt, the reader is taken on a wonderful journey of desire. Passions burn as resistance gives way to shared flames of night.


    • Sandygram silver member
      October 13, 2008
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      Wonderful Comment

      Thank you Dan. Glad you enjoyed the journey. I always enjoy your thoughts. Warm Hugs and Smiles for you.

      Always A Friend,
      Sandy

  • wildfiredreamer
    October 13, 2008

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    This is beautiful.
    It is so full of passion and desire, yet written so lovely that anyone could read it.
    I know what it is talking about so it really spoke to my heart.
    Keep it up dear


    • Sandygram silver member
      October 14, 2008
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      Thank you for the wonderful comment. You take care. Sandy

  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    October 12, 2008

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    o.O
    So softly sensual, it got a little warmer in here as the love flowed so effortlessly down the page

    Beautifully penned darling!
    Best of Luck

    Stay safe
    Love to You
    ~Manda


    • Sandygram silver member
      October 14, 2008
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      Lovely Comment!!

      Hello dear Amanda. I hope all is well with you. Hugs and Smiles! Take care, Sandy

  • Lae Fyrestorme
    October 12, 2008
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    This is great. Thanks for entering

    ~lae

    • Sandygram silver member
      October 14, 2008
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      Thank you for stopping by and reading. Take care. Sandy
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