When you get to a point in life,
There is something you can't help feeling.
That feeling is love.
It overwhelms your whole being.
That one guy will make you feel...
Well amazing.
He will care about you
And want to be with you forever.
Never give up on the one
That you can't go a day without thinking about.
He will lift you up into the clouds,
And make you stay there for a long time.
He is the guy who makes you smile when he laughs;
The one who gives you butterflies when he speaks;
The one who makes you happy
No matter what went on in your day.
If he ever lets you go,
It breaks your heart,
And you don't hate him...
Well, you know you love him then.
This guy is really amazing.
He's the one who can make you laugh
When you didn't even want to smile
Or even be happy.
When you are with this guy,
You can be yourself.
You aren't being some person
That you have no idea who it is.
All of these traits
Make you want to spend forever with him.
All of these traits are the reason
That love is an irresistable desire and a major blessing.
Author notes
This is the quote that inspired this one: Love is an irresistible desire to be irresistibly desired.
I really love it and I hope you all love it too. For once, though, it isn't about Daniel!
But it's still about love. hope you like it!
A contest entry
- Fresh As A Flower (No Prewrites) by HereComesTheSun.
450 points, ended October 26, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How do you like it? Let me know if there's anything to fix!
Comments
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i love it, no pun intended

