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Old Haunting Grounds (triolet)

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An old town owning two charters
for showing off old haunting grounds
Hundred years back in old quarters
An old town owning two charters
claimed to be cursed by martyrs
and by midnight the spell surrounds
An old town owning two charters
for showing off old haunting grounds

Author notes

photo prompt from photobucket.com . .
the triolet contains 8 lines and uses the following rhyme pattern:
A,B,a,A,a,b,A,B . . caps are repetitions . .

a rhymes with A
b rhymes with B
the last two lines repeat the first two A and B

see http://www.shadowpoetry.com for more information and examples

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  • cricketjeff gold member
    October 13, 2008

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    Excellent work!
    A good triolet is so hard to do!

    Great stuff

  • carole21
    October 13, 2008
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    nicely done . . thanks for the contest entry


  • The Drifter
    October 12, 2008

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    How you do all these different styles of poetry, I don't know.
    You are great-no B.S.
    I love you