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A Real World Called Heaven

Missing image

Whispers from another world

Sounds of angels songs were heard

Young girl's memory unwinds

Of the supernatural kind

 

 

 

Reading Bible's trustful pages,

Messages from saints and sages

Blessed hope of all the ages

Land for all of faith.

 

 

 

Peace there reigns unknown to man

No war, lion lying down with lamb

The Lord the light of all who dwell

Upon the golden streets, fear dispels!

 

 

 

A wish and flowers grow as expected

No crime, no sin there is detected

Pain and sickness is deflected

Life as it was always to be.

 

 

 

No darkness there of any kind

Lots of fruit you there can find

Happiness, love and joy that lasts

Never remembering sadness in past

 

 

 

Songs of saints forever ringing

Angels too join in the singing,

Crying" Worthy is the Lamb"

Who has redeemed all man

 

 

 

From their sin, and it's fate

Salvation's Son He did create

Saving man from eternal doom

Saying in heaven there is still room!

 

 

 

I've gone to prepare a place for you

He said and it is now ready to view

Heaven is more real than earth

God's places made, prepared of worth!

 

 

 

 

Have you got your passport new

Paid in full by accepting God's son

who's true?

Travelling there in the spiritual sky 

Is no farther away than a blink

of an eye!

 

 

 

Are you coming, are you ready?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

The picture is only a taste of a child who see's heaven by revelatory insight..But, on the pages of the Bible we are told of heaven...So much more than I share...but just some of what I read ....It is more real than earth! Our passport to heaven is acceptance of Him as Savior.(print credits www. photobucket.com)

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  • miss-princess
    December 1, 2008

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    wow I LOVE this. Brilliant work. i love the ending and the reference to a passport. Great work. keep writing.


  • Kathraina silver member
    November 30, 2008

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    Great job! This piece is amazing! God is so wonderful, thank you for writing such a beautiful piece!


  • Demington
    November 16, 2008

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    Good stuff. I often find myself differing from a theological standpoint with many of the poems. This poem seems to be detailed and quite solid as well.

    Very nice.

    Blessings,

    C


  • Autumn Rain13
    October 25, 2008

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    Wow!!!!!!!!! Exellent write as always, this was so beautiful and I loved reading it, great ryhme it flowed so nicely!!!!!!!!