only release shall sanctify me
though my soul hangs in purgatory,
caught between light of love
and darkness of goodbye,
tender pleasures cling to longing
unable to let go of illusive dreams,
while solemn pleas hang hollow
unheard and fading into dead air,
we loved; as if poetry in motion
now thoughts summon memories,
seeking reprieve from the cold
I stand in the silhouette of warmth,
bartering for a liaison with time
taking us back to oneness,
where once again we ride
upon soft wings of freedom.
Author notes
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Artist Credit-Unknown
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired by Hope Angel.
455 points, ended November 9, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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You captured the feeling of nastalgia well. I really liked the line: "unable to let of go illusive dreams". Thank you for entering. \♥/
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OH the things we could change given the ability to go back in time.
Very good write.
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excellent~
Oh
If I could go back in time............I wonder if I would change or do it all like I did the first time...
Great poem on the prompt
Best of luck in the contest
My muse has been downhill as of late hope it soon comes back LOL
Hugs
Susan~~~~
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Oh if only we could barter time hey... I think many of us would go back to relive moments of love and joy!
Superb write sis!
♥
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Very nicely done with such a tone of reality to it...
only release shall sanctify me
though my soul hangs in purgatory,
caught between light of love
and darkness of goodbye,...been here more then once. Very nice read girl. Best to you...
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Thanks Rick, I appreciate the read and comment.
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Nicely done. Very dreamlike.
Mike
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Thanks for the read and comment Chuckers. I appreciate it.
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