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Invisible

She is thin as a silver string, but tiny as a speck of dust - invisible.

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Prompt: One Line

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 25, 2008

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    Wow, this is quite lovely. I love the effect of your page, at first I thought something was wrong with my monitor, lol. Great line, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.

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    whisper

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    This is a great one liner I like that last bit of it the best thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest be well

  • Topnotchsy
    October 16, 2008

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    Nice write with this. Amazing what you can say with one line. Like how there were two perspectives here, the precious silver string, and the worthless speck of dust. Best of luck in the contest with this piece.

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