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brisk breeze

brisk breeze
trees tremble
leaves leave

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  • azure85 gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    brisk breeze
    trees tremble
    leaves leave

    A very nice use of alliteration, to bring out the sensations of the season. You can feel it all, thank you so much!

  • quakietree
    October 20, 2008
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    Well, that pretty much sums it up. Good immages.
    Good luck in this contest.
    :-) qt