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Haiku 911

closer to fall
drug through puddles
veins of ice crack

 

 

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  • azure85 gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    closer to fall
    drug through puddles
    veins of ice crack

    Yes, the ice starts to form this time of year, and it is an excellent seasonal word in L1, with multiple meanings. A very good haiku, thank you so much.

  • quakietree
    October 20, 2008
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    Whew! This haiku has several meanings and many images.
    Good luck in this contest.
    :-) qt


  • DogFish silver member
    October 15, 2008
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    Good play on words! You stepped "outside of the box" with your poem for the contest!


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 14, 2008

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    Damn now thats how you do a haiku. what a unique take on the prompt.

    best of luck hon in the contest

    Always

    Passions