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My Pal

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My pal,
he eats my transgressions
without a thought

he leaves me shivering
in the cold moonlight

waiting for the dew to evaporate against the sun

My best friend
he is my savior,
my hope & tongue
that clicks lovingly against my wall
that trembles at the thought of judgement

I stand guard
beside my sweetest friend
the one that devours,
no questions asked,
when you meet your end

 

 

 

 

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  • acari27 gold member
    October 13, 2008

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    I stand guard
    beside my sweetest friend
    the one that devours,
    no questions asked,
    when you meet your end

    this just slowly grew on me.

    felt like some kind of fresh pain, kind of numb, shredded emotion in the writing- the guarding felt like a hollow sentiment, a kind of autopilot reaction

    i dont know. it took me straight to that.